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babygirlgrijalva
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Wrote about 1 month ago

When I look into your eyes, I am nothing but surprised.

I know about your past and how it didn’t last,

How you got hurt, burnt, abused and used,
And I bet you're confused.

You deserve better, if not always and forever.

You said you didn’t care, but you just couldn’t bare,

Isn’t falling in love again sometimes a scare.

Let me into your life and I’ll show you that I care,

Like an endless dream I’ll always be there,

I know your busy but please make time,

Working so much should be a crime.

You must be taking time to think, or you need time alone,

Just know I am here waiting by the phone,

Forget about the past and look to the future,

Maybe you’re not ready, and I’m not trying to push you,

Just wanted to let you know that I’ll always be with you.

Fabian Aguilar
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DON'T KNOW WHO DIZ IS FOR, BUT IT SURE SOUNDZ LIKE MY STORY :)


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babygirlgrijalva
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Wrote about 1 month ago

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lol j/k.....it does sound like your story huh....I truly hope things work out for you and your girlShades

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Eric D. Stanford
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wow thats touching. who ever you wrote that to must be realy speshell to you. hes a lucky man.

babygirlgrijalva
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Thanks ericWink.....yeah he is special to meRolling Eyes

Lizbeth  Marquez
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Damn Nice poem!.Thanks for putting it out there....Take care..


*PRINCESSA*

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ThanksShades......I'm glad you liked it


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