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babygirlgrijalva
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Wrote over 2 years ago

When I look into your eyes, I am nothing but surprised.

I know about your past and how it didn’t last,

How you got hurt, burnt, abused and used,
And I bet you're confused.

You deserve better, if not always and forever.

You said you didn’t care, but you just couldn’t bare,

Isn’t falling in love again sometimes a scare.

Let me into your life and I’ll show you that I care,

Like an endless dream I’ll always be there,

I know your busy but please make time,

Working so much should be a crime.

You must be taking time to think, or you need time alone,

Just know I am here waiting by the phone,

Forget about the past and look to the future,

Maybe you’re not ready, and I’m not trying to push you,

Just wanted to let you know that I’ll always be with you.

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Wrote over 2 years ago

DON'T KNOW WHO DIZ IS FOR, BUT IT SURE SOUNDZ LIKE MY STORY :)


____________~shORty VCL x3~_____________

babygirlgrijalva
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Wrote over 2 years ago

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lol j/k.....it does sound like your story huh....I truly hope things work out for you and your girlShades

babygirlgrijalva modified post over 2 years ago.
Eric D. Stanford
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Wrote over 2 years ago

wow thats touching. who ever you wrote that to must be realy speshell to you. hes a lucky man.

babygirlgrijalva
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Wrote over 2 years ago

Thanks ericWink.....yeah he is special to meRolling Eyes

Lizbeth  Marquez
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Wrote over 2 years ago

Damn Nice poem!.Thanks for putting it out there....Take care..


*PRINCESSA*

babygirlgrijalva
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Wrote over 2 years ago

ThanksShades......I'm glad you liked it

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Wrote over 2 years ago

cute poem laura =] nice job


All religion, my friend,
is simply evolved out of
fraud, fear, greed, imagination, and poetry. -Edgar Allan Poe

"Chemistry can be a good and bad thing.
Chemistry is good when you make love with it.
Chemistry is bad when you make crack with it." -Adam Sandler

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babygirlgrijalva
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Quoting MzSylviaM on 06 January, 2010, 03:43AM MST

cute poem laura =] nice job

Glad you liked it....thanks

Mz3v1lx3
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Wrote over 2 years ago

its nice ... i like it


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.:"Give me strength 2 resist the wild life i desire. Help me escape temptation & the fire. Please help my family whose eyes silently plead 4 me not 2 do wrong & pray 4 me. God bless our mothers who cry every night, worrying we'll be killed my someone in a fight".:
****
Tired of trying
So sick of crying
Yeah, I’m smiling
But inside I’m dying
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“LIFE THROUGH MY EYEZ DIDN’T KNOW IT BE SO ROUGH. I DON’T NEED DRUGS TO ALUSINATE ALL I NEED IS MY MENTE STRAIGHT. LET ME TELL YOU ABOUT THIS FUCKED UP LIFE THAT I HATE”


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