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Wrote over 2 years ago
I gave u my heart and I gave u my soul,
But u gave it all up for some shit in a bowl!
U told me that day our marriage was a joke!
Probably u had just took a toke!
All that I have I gave it to u,
Now I realize our love was not true!
"Straight from the heart" were the feelings u had!
A husband to me and to my daughter a dad!
U were a role model, a hero and a god loving man!
But just like to me that love was not true,
U bruised up my heart til it was black and blue!
The things u would say and the way that u said them,
Just like our good times I will never forget them!
U were over ur ex or so u would say,
Marriage and divorce is just a game that u play!
Jumping back and forth is your only routine,
Well stay on that side with ur ghetto tweeker queen!
Cuz like u would tell me I'm way too high class,
Guess what muther fucker just kiss my ass!
I'm over ur bullshit just straight over u!
I'm still young and can do way better boo!
U said I was fat, but I can lose the weight!
U can't really change that tweeker bitches face!
There will never be another woman like me,
I tasted so sweet u sucked it up like a bee!
I didnt give up on u and ur kids,
Unlike your bitch that actually did!
She will do it again and then u will know!
U should of stayed wit me and not gone back to that ho!
U must like the way those other guys taste!
Lookin at u now ur such a disgrace!
U already knew I wasn't coming back through that door!
Ur last resort was going back with that whore!
Leaving that day was the best thing I did,
Cus now I can focus on me and my kid!
There's just one more thing that I need u to do,
Is sign the divorce papers so our marriage can be through!
Once this is over we can then both move on,
U with your old wayz and me way more strong!
With this burn,
There is a lesson I learned!
That becoming your wife,
Was the regret of my life!
I did not write this for u to feel mad!
Or throw in your face I'm the best that u had!
Well now I have said what I have to say!
Which is I am happy that I did not stay!
Seeing you this low, I don't miss u a bit,
Now I know leaving was the best thing I did!
Tere Vz modified post over 2 years ago.
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Wrote over 2 years ago
"U bruised up my heart til it was black and blue" very visual....good job...
very nicely written, im glad your goin to be a free woman again, that man didnt deserve to even kiss your feet from what i read. im sorry you were hurt and that your daughter will ask for her father..but this can make both of you stronger.. you both wont be naive...you both wont fall for any more tricks made by this man...and hopefully by anyone else. its sad when this situations happen...because a man never knows how good he has it...till he screws up....and your right, you might have the curves, you can lose it...but why? no ofense but only Dogs like bones, Curvy women are goregous... and dont let anyone tell you otherwise.... be happy ur curvy... most ppl get surgeries to have curves and you were naturally blessed with them, how about that? theres no use lettin someone hurt you... because he might not find it attractive....so good for you... now u see hes a shallow person.... i mean i personally prefer beauty thats internally...vs the outter beauty....for u see outter beauty fades....but your personality stays for life.... he might not realize it now...but im sure he will at one point and by then it wont be ur problem.. u'll be living your life happily with your daughter.... dont let him ruin you....in any way.. he was a jerk, and you deserved better wish you the best of luck on your new life
All religion, my friend,
is simply evolved out of
fraud, fear, greed, imagination, and poetry. -Edgar Allan Poe
"Chemistry can be a good and bad thing.
Chemistry is good when you make love with it.
Chemistry is bad when you make crack with it." -Adam Sandler
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Wrote over 2 years ago
Damn you tell him girl. I can kinda relate to that..except the marriage and tweaker girl part..LOL..But yeah that shit was tight! I feel the same way..NEVER LOOK BACK..PURO PA DELANTE!
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Wrote over 2 years ago
.:M¡ MºM §ª¥§ ¡ ¢ªN R€ª¢H TH€ §K¥ ¡F ¡ TR¡€D BUT WH¥ Dº€§ §H€ ¢R¥ WH€N ¡M H¡GH TR¥¡N 2 F£¥?.:
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.:"Give me strength 2 resist the wild life i desire. Help me escape temptation & the fire. Please help my family whose eyes silently plead 4 me not 2 do wrong & pray 4 me. God bless our mothers who cry every night, worrying we'll be killed my someone in a fight".:
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Tired of trying
So sick of crying
Yeah, I’m smiling
But inside I’m dying
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“LIFE THROUGH MY EYEZ DIDN’T KNOW IT BE SO ROUGH. I DON’T NEED DRUGS TO ALUSINATE ALL I NEED IS MY MENTE STRAIGHT. LET ME TELL YOU ABOUT THIS FUCKED UP LIFE THAT I HATE”
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Wrote over 2 years ago
damn i like,i can see the emotion in it,and the pain,great choices of words and phrasing...
the lunatik formerly known as pugzly has returned to reclaim my reign
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Wrote over 2 years ago
Quoting LUNATIK on 20 January, 2010, 11:15PM PSTdamn i like,i can see the emotion in it,and the pain,great choices of words and phrasing...
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.:M¡ MºM §ª¥§ ¡ ¢ªN R€ª¢H TH€ §K¥ ¡F ¡ TR¡€D BUT WH¥ Dº€§ §H€ ¢R¥ WH€N ¡M H¡GH TR¥¡N 2 F£¥?.:
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.:"Give me strength 2 resist the wild life i desire. Help me escape temptation & the fire. Please help my family whose eyes silently plead 4 me not 2 do wrong & pray 4 me. God bless our mothers who cry every night, worrying we'll be killed my someone in a fight".:
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Tired of trying
So sick of crying
Yeah, I’m smiling
But inside I’m dying
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“LIFE THROUGH MY EYEZ DIDN’T KNOW IT BE SO ROUGH. I DON’T NEED DRUGS TO ALUSINATE ALL I NEED IS MY MENTE STRAIGHT. LET ME TELL YOU ABOUT THIS FUCKED UP LIFE THAT I HATE”
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Wrote over 2 years ago
awww mi mamacita knows exactly what i meant,and thats why i love her...
the lunatik formerly known as pugzly has returned to reclaim my reign
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Wrote over 2 years ago
Quoting LUNATIK on 22 January, 2010, 12:03AM PSTawww mi mamacita knows exactly what i meant,and thats why i love her...
yup yup
.:M¡ MºM §ª¥§ ¡ ¢ªN R€ª¢H TH€ §K¥ ¡F ¡ TR¡€D BUT WH¥ Dº€§ §H€ ¢R¥ WH€N ¡M H¡GH TR¥¡N 2 F£¥?.:
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.:"Give me strength 2 resist the wild life i desire. Help me escape temptation & the fire. Please help my family whose eyes silently plead 4 me not 2 do wrong & pray 4 me. God bless our mothers who cry every night, worrying we'll be killed my someone in a fight".:
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Tired of trying
So sick of crying
Yeah, I’m smiling
But inside I’m dying
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“LIFE THROUGH MY EYEZ DIDN’T KNOW IT BE SO ROUGH. I DON’T NEED DRUGS TO ALUSINATE ALL I NEED IS MY MENTE STRAIGHT. LET ME TELL YOU ABOUT THIS FUCKED UP LIFE THAT I HATE”
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